Topic: First day on Mingle!!! May I have your feedback? Rate me!
brianfreda8's photo
Mon 02/20/12 08:17 PM
Hello, hello! So, first day on the site. I've been curious to try one of these sites, so here I am. I suppose I'll have a little look around Mingle and check back. Please excuse my ignorance, if any. Ha Take care!



later

Bravalady's photo
Mon 02/20/12 08:58 PM
Edited by Bravalady on Mon 02/20/12 09:01 PM
You started off really well with the photos, I like them all. But I'd recommend some serious rewording on your text. It comes across as really negative, all about what you DON'T want in a woman. Turn it around and make it positive. "Negative, stuck up," can turn into "Optimistic, down to earth." See what I mean?

You sound like a nice, fun guy. I think with a little tweaking you'll have the ladies running to your doorstep.

P.S. Welcome to Mingle!

chickayoshi's photo
Mon 02/20/12 08:58 PM
You have a very good profile. I think you will get some good hits. Welcome to the site! Hope you find what you are looking for.