Topic: ~this may be the longest poem...
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Wed 02/15/12 08:51 AM
this may be the longest poem I'll ever write
as love buries itself deep inside me
to the hilt
I watch moonlight
picking out things in the room
while leaving secrets in the antique silence
I sleep
only-
when I am in your hand
I sleep
only-
when I am in your head
I sleep
only-
when I am in your heart
and this may be the longest poem I'll ever write

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Wed 02/15/12 08:54 AM
very long flowerforyou

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Wed 02/15/12 09:02 AM
biggrin flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Wed 02/15/12 10:27 AM
nicely done (as always)

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 02/15/12 07:30 PM
noway YOU make ME feel I write BOOKS,,,laugh
Great LONG one here teasin,,nice,,,,flowerforyou

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Thu 02/16/12 07:33 AM
manOfewwords...a smile and a thankyou
tazztops..:smile:,thankyou
kc...aww,kind you
iamforu...smiling me,thanku
teasingbrunette

i worked on this poem a little more....


this may be the longest poem I'll ever write

as love buries itself deep inside me,to the hilt

I watch moonlight picking out things in the room

while leaving secrets in the antique silence

I sleep,only when I am in your hand

when I wake I see my dreams turn into words

I am faithful to flowers,days and you

and this may be the longest poem I'll ever write


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Thu 02/16/12 07:44 AM
Well written,nice readdrinker flowerforyou

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Thu 02/16/12 12:56 PM
I like both versions...feeling the love.

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Thu 02/16/12 03:12 PM
I so :heart: your writes TB..

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Thu 02/16/12 03:36 PM
Excellent write.....smokin

Love speaks volumes...written upon the pages
of the heart, mind, and soul.flowerforyou :heart:

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Sun 02/19/12 07:20 AM
2KidsMom...thankyou for reading..
pkd1220...good..i think the second is bestest..smile.
Ainjel...thankyou,generous you.
Up2Us...sweet,thankyou
teasingbrunette