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this may be the longest poem I'll ever write
as love buries itself deep inside me to the hilt I watch moonlight picking out things in the room while leaving secrets in the antique silence I sleep only- when I am in your hand I sleep only- when I am in your head I sleep only- when I am in your heart and this may be the longest poem I'll ever write |
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very long
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nicely done (as always)
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YOU make ME feel I write BOOKS,,,
Great LONG one here teasin,,nice,,,, |
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manOfewwords...a smile and a thankyou
tazztops..,thankyou kc...aww,kind you iamforu...smiling me,thanku teasingbrunette i worked on this poem a little more.... this may be the longest poem I'll ever write as love buries itself deep inside me,to the hilt I watch moonlight picking out things in the room while leaving secrets in the antique silence I sleep,only when I am in your hand when I wake I see my dreams turn into words I am faithful to flowers,days and you and this may be the longest poem I'll ever write |
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Well written,nice read
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I like both versions...feeling the love.
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I so your writes TB..
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Excellent write.....
Love speaks volumes...written upon the pages of the heart, mind, and soul. |
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2KidsMom...thankyou for reading..
pkd1220...good..i think the second is bestest..smile. Ainjel...thankyou,generous you. Up2Us...sweet,thankyou teasingbrunette |
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