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Topic: jealously....
Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 02/06/12 07:16 AM
jealously I thought I knew people who claimed to be one with me… think you did too but truth not true… Hit the wall, don't fall... but if you do I'll catch you… and I know you'll catch me toO…

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 02/06/12 07:30 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 02/06/12 12:09 PM
Thanks Tazz ((( )))

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 02/06/12 10:38 PM Edited by Up2Us on Mon 02/06/12 10:39 PM
Nice write..... Love its style format.....

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Mon 02/06/12 11:06 PM
nice write :)

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 02/07/12 03:38 AM
Nice write..... Love its style format..... It was a "heart" felt write...If we allow it jealously can be very hurtful, very damaging....Jealously, a sign of insecurity and unhappiness..... Thank you for the comment Up2Us!!...

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 02/07/12 03:39 AM
nice write :) (((((Penny)))))...Good morning! ...Thank you !

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Tue 02/07/12 04:45 AM
catch me I'm falling......for you

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 02/07/12 04:48 AM
catch me I'm falling......for you I got ya babe!!!

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Tue 02/07/12 04:53 AM
catch me I'm falling......for you I got ya babe!!! ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 02/07/12 04:57 AM
catch me I'm falling......for you I got ya babe!!! ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here Yes deer..... Don't you have work to dO?

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Tue 02/07/12 04:58 AM
catch me I'm falling......for you I got ya babe!!! ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here Yes deer..... Don't you have work to dO? yes deer I dO later

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 02/07/12 05:02 AM
catch me I'm falling......for you I got ya babe!!! ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here Yes deer..... Don't you have work to dO? yes deer I dO later Bye....

Ruth34611 Joined Sat 08/02/08 Posts: 32401	Tue 02/07/12 06:32 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 02/07/12 06:40 AM
((((( )))))

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 02/09/12 11:32 AM
jealously I thought I knew people who claimed to be one with me… think you did too but truth not true… Hit the wall, don't fall... but if you do I'll catch you… and I know you'll catch me toO… http://youtu.be/BdKtS4jgMHA

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Thu 02/09/12 04:02 PM
Nice write..... Love its style format..... ....Jealously, a sign of insecurity and unhappiness..... so true, let love rule, you two will shine! i agree with UP2us, i enjoyed the style, the flow of the...fall. well done!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 02/09/12 04:57 PM
Nice write..... Love its style format..... ....Jealously, a sign of insecurity and unhappiness..... so true, let love rule, you two will shine! i agree with UP2us, i enjoyed the style, the flow of the...fall. well done! TY x 10 ...Your post means a lot to me Bastet...

Mirage4279 Joined Sat 09/04/10 Posts: 2466	Thu 02/09/12 09:09 PM
Pretty good... I do not know if it was intended but it looked like their was a play on words towards the end. Bravo!!!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/10/12 04:16 AM
Pretty good... I do not know if it was intended but it looked like their was a play on words towards the end. Bravo!!! TY Mirage.......play on words?.........never!!