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I can hear you crying softly in the other room
I know how alone you feel, and that you wish none of this was real, you made the choices that lead to this, yet still I want to heal you with a kiss. I watched you leave everyday, you told me you had to go when I begged you to stay, how can you cry when you wanted it this way. do you like hurting me with these games that you play. do we have to do this day after day, maybe you're right and its best this way. I want to cry with you but I am to dry, my bodies to weak and the wools out from my eyes, I gave you my heart you filled it with lies, now it's time to say our good byes. |
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Nice write daddy,,,and lies destroy love and kill peoples dreams,,YES,,lies and cheating,,will NEVER BE ON MY TO DO LIST..
Having said that,,just write man,,write down in the blood of your hearts truth,,all the pain,misery and let it leave your hand,,as it leaves your spirit,,THATS what started me here writing six years ago. Trying to free my past,,and her lies,,and try to save what was left of a charred heart,,so now,,THATS behind me,,and love awaits,, |
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Nice write daddy,,,and lies destroy love and kill peoples dreams,,YES,,lies and cheating,,will NEVER BE ON MY TO DO LIST.. Having said that,,just write man,,write down in the blood of your hearts truth,,all the pain,misery and let it leave your hand,,as it leaves your spirit,,THATS what started me here writing six years ago. Trying to free my past,,and her lies,,and try to save what was left of a charred heart,,so now,,THATS behind me,,and love awaits,, Thank you I used to write, this is the 1st time in about 4 years that I have though. never posted nothing before except on poem on youtube that i deleted shortly after uploading. |
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Mon 02/06/12 01:34 AM
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Nice write daddy,,,and lies destroy love and kill peoples dreams,,YES,,lies and cheating,,will NEVER BE ON MY TO DO LIST.. Having said that,,just write man,,write down in the blood of your hearts truth,,all the pain,misery and let it leave your hand,,as it leaves your spirit,,THATS what started me here writing six years ago. Trying to free my past,,and her lies,,and try to save what was left of a charred heart,,so now,,THATS behind me,,and love awaits,, Thank you I used to write, this is the 1st time in about 4 years that I have though. never posted nothing before except on poem on youtube that i deleted shortly after uploading. I also never gave a damn about spelling or Grammar,,and still find PROPER,,IMPROPER,,,lol It took me like fifteen minutes to type out even the shortest sentences..and I learned to get better,,as I was using a Dictionary then,,now I rarely spell wrong,,but do error often,,lol Poetry came tome through reading others works they did,,and then finding my own expression of talking with what my heart speaks to me to say,,and many liked them,,so I kept on writing them..lol Glad to have you here with us and this really is so much more than just a dating site,,your learn that to as you stay on and read, reply and write,,Good luck.. |
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Nice write daddy,,,and lies destroy love and kill peoples dreams,,YES,,lies and cheating,,will NEVER BE ON MY TO DO LIST.. Having said that,,just write man,,write down in the blood of your hearts truth,,all the pain,misery and let it leave your hand,,as it leaves your spirit,,THATS what started me here writing six years ago. Trying to free my past,,and her lies,,and try to save what was left of a charred heart,,so now,,THATS behind me,,and love awaits,, Thank you I used to write, this is the 1st time in about 4 years that I have though. never posted nothing before except on poem on youtube that i deleted shortly after uploading. I also never gave a damn about spelling or Grammar,,and still find PROPER,,IMPROPER,,,lol It took me like fifteen minutes to type out even the shortest sentences..and I learned to get better,,as I was using a Dictionary then,,now I rarely spell wrong,,but do error often,,lol Poetry came tome through reading others works they did,,and then finding my own expression of talking with what my heart speaks to me to say,,and many liked them,,so I kept on writing them..lol Glad to have you here with us and this really is so much more than just a dating site,,your learn that to as you stay on and read, reply and write,,Good luck.. I hope so as I am looking more for friends then I am a relationship, I believe that something like that just happens. if we are meant to meet here will will. Over the years my ex has done a great job of ridding me of my friends, I would simply love to meet new people and have a good time guy or girl as long as their good people. I will continue to write and be active here as i see a lot fo good people already. thank you for you're kind words :) |
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