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When pain becomes you
and all seen is within do Can strength be what is was? Or passive annoyances remain the cause To every heart who burns to die I'm singing and falling with another lie Another sought after for the time Closer to every single pang in mind When cries can breathe no more Because people are strained to the core This is no false plea I am know who I am finally This is the soul, stripped of just me _____________________________________________________________ *Based on a new awakening I had. Might turn it into a song, who knows?* |
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That was wonderful my friend it would make a good song i think,Happy New Years
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DAMNNNNNNNN Mariah,,,YOUR GOOD,,this is very cool and many thoughts to admire and grow through reading them... NICE..
AND,,,,I SAY,,,,I CAN DIG IT! More--------More----------More,,,, |
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This one is an oldie. I wrote it when I was 18. My writing was a tad childish lol But I've taken some poems from the past recent and made them a little more fuller. I think I should do it with this one. Came up with it so fast too. I was beginning a story about a girl scraping herself to get by and this was the intro I put before the chapters.
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