Topic: *~*Stripped*~*
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Sat 12/31/11 05:04 PM
When pain becomes you
and all seen is within do
Can strength be what is was?
Or passive annoyances remain the cause

To every heart who burns to die
I'm singing and falling with another lie
Another sought after for the time
Closer to every single pang in mind

When cries can breathe no more
Because people are strained to the core
This is no false plea
I am know who I am finally
This is the soul, stripped of just me

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*Based on a new awakening I had. Might turn it into a song, who knows?*

skywisper's photo
Sat 12/31/11 05:22 PM
That was wonderful my friend it would make a good song i think,Happy New Years

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Sat 12/31/11 06:35 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 01/01/12 01:31 AM
noway DAMNNNNNNNN Mariah,,,YOUR GOOD,,this is very cool and many thoughts to admire and grow through reading them...:wink: NICE..

AND,,,,I SAY,,,,I CAN DIG IT! laugh

More--------More----------More,,,,:banana:

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Sun 01/01/12 10:56 AM
This one is an oldie. I wrote it when I was 18. My writing was a tad childish lol But I've taken some poems from the past recent and made them a little more fuller. I think I should do it with this one. Came up with it so fast too. I was beginning a story about a girl scraping herself to get by and this was the intro I put before the chapters.