shhhhhh....here...why dont you....


inject a little sympathy
into the veins of how you see
create a little empathy
walk away & let me be.
numbness brews inside of me
when you refuse to let me breathe
it chokes my sense of sanity
another obsticle between you & me.

Nice write....

thank you..
it was written about people that wont allow you to walk away from the constant nagging...
but after i read it again i see it has a stronger second meaning

REVISION AND ADD ON..sounds more complete now
why don't you....
slow down, have a seat,
to close to fire you cant stand the heat.
tell the truth just don't lie to me
but back off a bit and let me breathe,
i don't listen when you yell & scream
it's an obsticle between you & me..

shhhhhh....here...why dont you....


inject a little sympathy
into the veins of how you see
create a little empathy
walk away & let me be.
numbness brews inside of me
when you refuse to let me breathe
it chokes my sense of sanity
another obsticle between you & me.
.......