Topic: Ashes in time
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Sat 12/17/11 07:36 AM


somewhere between time and a memory
there are shades of lights and moments of fright
that remains to be seen
Your dreams are a palace with iron gates
and your motives are meaningless,when you cant even say
that I can see beyond the shadows of a dream

Someone must fall when the support of the wall
becomes too brittle and weak
All the weight of the world and the shoulders its hurled
justify this righteously


"I belong to the night its the only place for me
I cant fill such a void in this world I say in all honesty
for ashes in time is what they'll make of me


Reliving each day leaves much to be discovered
on the bed where you lay//tears upon yesterdays covers
don't you go crying now its all the same
your condition weakening

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Sat 12/17/11 07:37 AM
doesnt make a whole lot of sense..but it fit the guitar progression I came up with..so I just kept it

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Sat 12/17/11 07:47 AM
It sounds great,,and remember,,if anyone a hundred years from now,,finds your lyric's,,or hears them said,,
All of them can be traced right back to your heart...:wink: bigsmile

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Sat 12/17/11 08:03 AM
Nice man,Thanks!

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Sat 12/17/11 08:52 AM
Makes perfect sense to me:smile: Nice writeflowerforyou

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Sat 12/17/11 09:07 AM
I appreciate that MisKim!

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Sat 12/17/11 09:54 AM
Opening up with "somewhere between time and memory there are shades of light and moments of fright"

Grabbed me and pulled me in...You are so good at this.....smile2

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Sat 12/17/11 10:07 AM

Opening up with "somewhere between time and memory there are shades of light and moments of fright"

Grabbed me and pulled me in...You are so good at this.....smile2



Good at what..writing?Its just something I enjoy doing.I really appreciate you taking the time to read my efforts..it means a lot!thank you Leigh