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somewhere between time and a memory there are shades of lights and moments of fright that remains to be seen Your dreams are a palace with iron gates and your motives are meaningless,when you cant even say that I can see beyond the shadows of a dream Someone must fall when the support of the wall becomes too brittle and weak All the weight of the world and the shoulders its hurled justify this righteously "I belong to the night its the only place for me I cant fill such a void in this world I say in all honesty for ashes in time is what they'll make of me Reliving each day leaves much to be discovered on the bed where you lay//tears upon yesterdays covers don't you go crying now its all the same your condition weakening |
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doesnt make a whole lot of sense..but it fit the guitar progression I came up with..so I just kept it
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It sounds great,,and remember,,if anyone a hundred years from now,,finds your lyric's,,or hears them said,,
All of them can be traced right back to your heart... |
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Nice man,Thanks!
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Makes perfect sense to me Nice write
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I appreciate that MisKim!
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Opening up with "somewhere between time and memory there are shades of light and moments of fright"
Grabbed me and pulled me in...You are so good at this..... |
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Opening up with "somewhere between time and memory there are shades of light and moments of fright" Grabbed me and pulled me in...You are so good at this..... Good at what..writing?Its just something I enjoy doing.I really appreciate you taking the time to read my efforts..it means a lot!thank you Leigh |
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