Silent Rain

Have you ever cried in vain?
Your tears fell like a silent rain
The cold embrace of loneliness
Grasping like an angry fist
Wandering from here to there
Not belonging anywhere
Eyes that spawned a million tears
That sees a world which never cares
A face that never gave a smile
Because it never felt worthwhile

The cuts were deep
You felt the pain
Drops of blood
Like silent rain
Tried so hard to comprehend
Why your scares would never mend

A wasted life drifts down the drain
Still…no one hears the silent rain

Excellent write.....

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This is a very good poem,,and I think it has a chance at a very good song?
Like,,
In this world where no one cares,
we live unseen, crying our tears.
You left me with cuts so deep.
Drops of blood I feel your pain,
living in this silent rain.


Grasping like an angry fist
Wandering from here to there
Not belonging anywhere
Eyes that spawned a million tears
Sees a world that never cares.


You left me with cuts so deep.
Drops of blood I feel your pain,
living in this silent rain.


A face that can't find a smile
Life no-longer feeling worthwhile.
Take me to a place I belong,
Before all my blood is gone.




Just a thought for you to look into,,but I can hear it as a cool song to get lost in at times of hurt?