Topic: a profound line
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Thu 10/20/11 02:54 PM
clearly on the banks of the west
i saw few lilies grows
like i had seen the falling star,the unidentified flying object,the shriek on your eyes and
the bars between.
Uninvited and unvisited,
the placebo to my eyes died
before i could put few fanatic verse.
The lilies,
they sunk by the bank
sunken by the sun
they resemble the soil
and do you say not it ever existed?
Between my lines and reality
the distinction is just a fine line.
and across the line i saw few lilies grow.

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Thu 10/20/11 03:31 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Thu 10/20/11 08:30 PM
Nice one man,,,drinker Welcome to our book of a thousand pages,,,

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Fri 10/21/11 07:27 AM
Nice write. :)

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Fri 10/21/11 08:47 AM
Nice write...smokin