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Sadness creeping under the skin burrowing away; hiding from happiness, seeking darkness, a corner to hide in
look at the girl in the swirling blue dress she stumbles on the corner watches the creature crouch curious of what this might be she peers closer light falls on the creature it shreaks, ripping long claws into her flesh biting deep into her heart cutting a wound that will never heal opening her eyes; making her see pain walking away a new person things a differant in her eyes no longer does she see flowers and smiles shadows of the night are now her friends she is new a changed girl the girl has beauty in darkest ways shunned by all she seeks the dead at the hour of sorrow she meets her minions her only companion is death days go on, she screams her pain so she sews her lips to hide away her blood is shed in her fear for she is the lady of sadness |
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Nice Write
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thank you! its one of my favorites i wrote it when i was 13
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In my humble opinion that is Awesume!!!U can feel the pain this lady is going through and U made that come out big time!!
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well thank you!
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Nice write . . .Welcome to mingle looking forward to more of your writes. :)
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thank you! i will be posting more soon!
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Dead is the heart which once held the World,,now killed by all that pierced its shell,,,feeling like the darkest Hell...down their in life's wishing well.........
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love it!
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Sadness creeping under the skin burrowing away; hiding from happiness, seeking darkness, a corner to hide in look at the girl in the swirling blue dress she stumbles on the corner watches the creature crouch curious of what this might be she peers closer light falls on the creature it shreaks, ripping long claws into her flesh biting deep into her heart cutting a wound that will never heal opening her eyes; making her see pain walking away a new person things a differant in her eyes no longer does she see flowers and smiles shadows of the night are now her friends she is new a changed girl the girl has beauty in darkest ways shunned by all she seeks the dead at the hour of sorrow she meets her minions her only companion is death days go on, she screams her pain so she sews her lips to hide away her blood is shed in her fear for she is the lady of sadness |
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Excellent write......
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thank you guys
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