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| Topic: Love - A Congeries of Emotions | |
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A little bit of Lust, A little bit of Care. Bear Hugs & Kisses, But Beware ! Show you're Dominance, But sometimes let it go. Don't hold yourself, Let the emotions flow. Tell him when he's wrong, Pick up a fight. Kiss him slowly, On a moonlit night. Your heart will still ache, No matter what you do. Because love gets complicated, If you're not BEING YOU........ This is my first attempt at poetry, critics please be nice to me :) |
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Well done :)
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welcome...
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 Very nice write.....
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awesome
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Thanks Guys !
It made me scribble a few more lines..... @ Up2Us - I seriously love your writes. super amazing. |
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 We were ALLnew here once to,,just like YOU.. We write,,trying to share some light,,,,seldom ever fight. Your write was really cool,,as Ijust read it,,tonight..  I hope to read ya somemore and your doing outstanding,,for your first time,,,,,Keep writing and I'll KEEP reading,,be blessed. |
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ir really likes me, specially when you say love is complicated ;)
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