Topic: You Colored My World
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Sat 07/14/07 05:33 PM
You colored my world with such beauty
With such beautiful shades and hues
You made my sky seem much brighter
With flufy white clouds on blues
My heart was laid out as a canvas
Like a beautiful lawn of lush green
You painted it with love and accpetance
Gave it a beauty it never had seen
My smile was even brighter with you
Like the glorious orange-yellow sun
My heart was like silver with trimings of gold
Because I felt like you wee the one
Your heart was as pure as a rose
In beautiful crimson red
And my heart lept with delight
With every single word that you said
You made my life a living rainbow
More beautiful than I can say
But now you are gone, you said goodbye
And the colors have faded to gray.

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Sat 07/14/07 05:36 PM
Beautifully written, such vivid emotion. Nice work. flowerforyou

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Sat 07/14/07 06:05 PM
Wow that was excellent writing christian
GEL

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Sat 07/14/07 06:11 PM
:wink: Psssssst, hey post,,,,,,,I think we may have a new and inspiring poet here.....wink,wink,lol
Another GREAT work of words, christian..:heart: flowerforyou