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Topic: ~it's a damn fine day
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 09/09/11 02:04 PM
it's a damn fine day to rain when my roof needs fixing it's a damn fine day for the well to run dry when i'm thirsty it's a damn fine day when i feel bad-inside and get compliments on the outside it's a damn fine day for me to find a heart drawn in the sand at my feet when i thought i had lost mine it's a damn fine day for us to f--- and call it love it's a damn fine day to write words and see them scrape the sky it's a damn fine day..........

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Fri 09/09/11 02:16 PM
to read your words like rain drops from the sky...

chic83 Joined Sat 09/03/11 Posts: 20	Fri 09/09/11 02:40 PM
those are damn fine words girl...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 09/09/11 03:02 PM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Fri 09/09/11 07:27 PM
Damn fine words is right..

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 09/10/11 05:49 AM
A gray sunrise & scarlet clouds....

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 09/10/11 06:49 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 09/10/11 09:13 AM
manOfewwords.....those are truly fine words... chic83...thankyou! kc..... Ainjel... Up2Us...i'll be the scarlet clouds... tazztops........i get one extra ...awesome.. teasingbrunette

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 09/10/11 09:42 AM
Now THIS,,,,is REAL,,,and THIS,,,I LIKE. Spoken from a heart that heals,,spoken from a future that yields. very NICE teasin,,,,,

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 09/10/11 02:37 PM
iam4u.....thankyou...teasingbrunette

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 09/10/11 02:48 PM
manOfewwords.....those are truly fine words... chic83...thankyou! kc..... Ainjel... Up2Us...i'll be the scarlet clouds... tazztops........i get one extra ...awesome.. teasingbrunette It is indeed a fine wonderful collection of words that touch the chords of life.

Sandcrabe Joined Fri 09/02/11 Posts: 9	Mon 09/12/11 08:45 PM
Good poem. But my day was work work work...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 09/13/11 10:36 AM
tazztops.... Sandcrabe......thankyou....& you have to adore the days that are play,play,play teasingbrunette

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