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Topic: Stuck in their ways.
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 08/18/11 01:03 PM
soooooo.great.sad but wonderful and true. well thank you my sweet dear lady,,and how have you been,,hey,,I was out your way not to long ago,,thought of ya while there,,but couldn't find ya,,,But thanks for replying and sorry I missed you there

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 08/19/11 06:45 PM
time,,when you have all you need, you have nothing to do, when you need more of it,, iT eludes you. when they bOTH come together PERFECT. You've nothing to THINK,,,,,, this is that moment,, as I take a drag,,and blink..

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Fri 08/19/11 08:33 PM
Well done Terry. I have written about issues such as these before. The problem is, some are so disturbed or have issues that comprehension on the writing eludes them. When wanting to make sure they understand it is sometimes best to read it to them.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 08/19/11 11:41 PM
Well done Terry. I have written about issues such as these before. The problem is, some are so disturbed or have issues that comprehension on the writing eludes them. When wanting to make sure they understand it is sometimes best to read it to them. THESE are just some,,,minds of people I have met through all my life Pam,,and I am imagining all that they MIGHT be thinking as I have watched them while with them,,, Many suffer issues no one will ever fully understand ,,but its just a relection of their person here..that I was hoping to show others the many sides and mind sets,,that people can be stuck in,,,,

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 08/20/11 09:10 AM Edited by Up2Us on Sat 08/20/11 09:48 AM
The Contortionist... Diabetes a pit bull embraces his throat. His body falls victim to heart attacks, and strokes. Frustration a cornerstone. Rehabilitation a inquisition. This unwilling contortionist whose limbs revolt & twist. A castaway of each moment. In a fog of abstract realities. Life becomes a mist of despair. Faces of love ones fade into distant dreams. Life support lingers.... Tubes, ventilation, reluctant surgeries, and medical procedures. Then silence....... Eternity speaks..... The contortionist is set free. His memories, and love are a postcard upon his soul. For a journey, still to come...... Poem: MHS©Copyright 2011

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 08/20/11 08:35 PM Edited by iam4u on Sat 08/20/11 08:37 PM
THIS is very good man,,and The Contortionist... Diabetes a pit bull embraces his throat. His body falls victim to heart attacks, and strokes. Frustration a cornerstone. Rehabilitation a inquisition. This unwilling contortionist whose limbs revolt & twist. A castaway of each moment. In a fog of abstract realities. Life becomes a mist of despair. Faces of love ones fade into distant dreams. Life support lingers.... Tubes, ventilation, reluctant surgeries, and medical procedures. Then silence....... Eternity speaks..... The contortionist is set free. His memories, and love are a postcard upon his soul. For a journey, still to come...... Poem: MHS©Copyright 2011 THIS is very good man,,and I have lost many friends to this.Thanks for posting it,,,,<3

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 08/20/11 09:45 PM
THIS is very good man,,and I have lost many friends to this.Thanks for posting it,,,,<3 I'm glad to contribute to your thread.... Yes, diabetes is a major health issue on the rise. My prayers always go out for anyone affected by illness and their families.....