Topic: hello im new on here rate my profile | |
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: plz rate my profile i would love to see who liked it and plz feel free to let me know if u have some thing that will bless me about a change or something that i can add to help me or just to say what u liked or what u didnt THANC U BLESSINGS TO EVERY ONE
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I'm sorry, but its really hard to read your profile, because its all in capital. I tried.
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Hi Hon,
I think you need to do two things with your profile: You need to rewrite it without using all capital letters, and you need to use punctuation at the end of each sentence so that readers can tell where one thought ends and another begins. Good luck! |
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