Topic: Eloquent Butterfly....
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Mon 07/04/11 05:24 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Mon 07/04/11 05:56 AM


Eloquent Butterfly


A pictorial of a butterfly caught in jagged rain.
Obituaries of love, painted in futile skies.
Heartache echoes, openly within a inexorable mind.
Winds contrive against her aggregated heart.

Eloquent butterfly crucified by rain.

Drama entangles her insatiable thirst to be loved.
A opaque evening cascades upon her life.
Faded colors, and fragile wings torn by raindrops.
A taboo of mercurial ambiguities.
False promises, and lies are in a liaison.

Eloquent butterfly crucified by rain.

Dancing between raindrops seeking a soulmate.
Her eyes relinquish tears, against a tenacious sky.
A capricious dilemma of emotional dreams.
Graciously she bows before a pretentious reality.
Heartache in flight, captured by romantic dreams.


Poem:
MHS©Copyright 2011


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Mon 07/04/11 08:21 AM
Wow, I Love it, Truly. Touched my soul.
xx

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Mon 07/04/11 08:37 AM
so poignant, i think so many can find themselves in there. flowerforyou

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Mon 07/04/11 11:52 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Mon 07/04/11 02:50 PM
:smile: Very cool man,,,,

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Mon 07/04/11 02:59 PM
..Beautiful..smokin

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Tue 07/05/11 09:49 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Tue 07/05/11 09:50 AM

Wow, I Love it, Truly. Touched my soul.
xx
CoRKy26...Thank you, for the personal email.
It's beautiful the thought of touching someone on the other side of the world....flowerforyou


An again, thanks all.....smokin flowerforyou

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Fri 08/17/12 08:23 PM
Bumping up / sharing a old write....flowerforyou

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Sat 08/18/12 12:25 AM
The imagery it created for me was of a fragile creature surrendering to death, in a world she can never belong to.

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Sun 08/19/12 09:17 AM
You encourage my inquisitivness in taking time.

Curious and wonderful to read as always

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Sat 08/25/12 03:12 PM
Thank you Ladywind7, and poppashroom.....:smile: smokin

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Sat 08/25/12 04:19 PM
Up2Us...not sure if i want to be the rain or the butterfly...

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Sun 08/26/12 04:29 AM

Up2Us...not sure if i want to be the rain or the butterfly...
Love & Heartache walk hand in hand.....flowerforyou smokin

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Tue 08/28/12 02:09 PM
I could feel my good and evil sides..rising..one is happy ..one is sad..loved it.