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Edited by
Up2Us
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Mon 07/04/11 05:56 AM
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Eloquent Butterfly A pictorial of a butterfly caught in jagged rain. Obituaries of love, painted in futile skies. Heartache echoes, openly within a inexorable mind. Winds contrive against her aggregated heart. Eloquent butterfly crucified by rain. Drama entangles her insatiable thirst to be loved. A opaque evening cascades upon her life. Faded colors, and fragile wings torn by raindrops. A taboo of mercurial ambiguities. False promises, and lies are in a liaison. Eloquent butterfly crucified by rain. Dancing between raindrops seeking a soulmate. Her eyes relinquish tears, against a tenacious sky. A capricious dilemma of emotional dreams. Graciously she bows before a pretentious reality. Heartache in flight, captured by romantic dreams. Poem: MHS©Copyright 2011 |
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Wow, I Love it, Truly. Touched my soul.
xx |
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so poignant, i think so many can find themselves in there.
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Very cool man,,,,
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..Beautiful..
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Tue 07/05/11 09:50 AM
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Wow, I Love it, Truly. Touched my soul. xx It's beautiful the thought of touching someone on the other side of the world.... An again, thanks all..... |
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Bumping up / sharing a old write....
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The imagery it created for me was of a fragile creature surrendering to death, in a world she can never belong to.
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You encourage my inquisitivness in taking time.
Curious and wonderful to read as always |
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Thank you Ladywind7, and poppashroom.....
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Up2Us...not sure if i want to be the rain or the butterfly...
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Up2Us...not sure if i want to be the rain or the butterfly... |
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I could feel my good and evil sides..rising..one is happy ..one is sad..loved it.
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