Topic: To Whom It May Concern
catz91's photo
Tue 05/10/11 11:20 AM
I ran away yesterday,
To a place of bliss,
Where I could stay,
Forever in lovers first kiss.
I escaped the pain,
But only for seconds,
I returned once more,
To my emptiness.

Its unbearable sometimes,
Being weighed down,
By careless people,
Who rip my life, from me.

Its their fault for how I feel,
the constant judging,I cant take,
So i release myself from this world,
Watch as my life flows from me,

This is what you have done.

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Tue 05/10/11 11:38 AM
Nice write....smokin

Arahamana's photo
Sun 05/15/11 11:35 PM
You write nicely and the message of the is clear and understandable,even a person with out any knowledge of literature can understand it.