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Thirst While sailing up upon a ocean filled from tears of heartache. I notice you silently standing on the shores of my heart. A love song waiting to be sung orchestrated by time. Destiny tranquilly kisses the hand of heartache goodbye. A rainbow of expression standing in the doorway of two hearts begin to thirst for a moment more.... The heavens open at the sound of your voice across my soul. A candle burns into desire encompassing thoughts held captive within my mind. Reflecting upon midnight stars guiding you my way. The dawn is the signature of your name, written upon the wind. A rainbow of expression standing in the doorway of two hearts begin to thirst for a moment more.... In the early morning hours of my heart. Like a dove my arms are held open in innocence. A cotton candy parade on a rainy April morning. The colors flow into a rainbow viewed through my soul. A rainbow of expression standing in the doorway of two hearts begin to thirst for a moment more.... Poem: MHS©Copyright 2011 |
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I like the part about the ocean and the shore, that was nice....
Didn't really care for the rainbow part. it seems unfitting. |
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I loved it especially the picture.
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Thanks....
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Tue 05/17/11 12:36 PM
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I like the part about the ocean and the shore, that was nice.... Didn't really care for the rainbow part. it seems unfitting. The rainbow is not literal, but a figurative representation of emotions flowing through heart, mind & soul. |
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