Topic: Please be gentle...
batman515's photo
Thu 04/21/11 08:57 PM
I am who I am, so what do you guys think?

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Thu 04/21/11 09:52 PM
I guess I’m a dork because I like to read something that doesn’t have pictures on the inside. I guess I’m a lame because I’m not into ‘gangster rap’.

In my opinion, remove the above part, no negativity is good. You might want to add a least one picture of you smiling. OTherwise you did a pretty good job.
waving Welcome to the mingle family & Good Luck on your search

AvailableandSingle's photo
Thu 04/21/11 10:04 PM
Hi and welcome!

First, I really like your honesty. I like your profile! I do have a few ideas though...

How about adding some action photos of yourself with or without friends? You are good looking!

I would recommend that you consider deleting a few phrases in the narrative part of your profile. I think the following two phrases should go because they are self-critical: "I guess I'm a dork because"... and "I guess I'm a lame because"... I would try to stay on the positive side while writing about yourself in a profile. After all, you have alot of good qualities.

Under your profession, I think you should state your real profession instead of "Unemployed". Later, when you are getting to know or dating a new woman, you could mention that you are currently looking for work or are between jobs.

Good luck to you!