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Topic: Know Who
DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Fri 04/01/11 09:47 AM Edited by DeathsTreaty on Fri 04/01/11 09:49 AM
Depth of self wallowing The foreseen Forsaken Lost moments left to cry on The daily struggle to keep on An attempted attack of the Heart A jab at your nature Walk the Faulty line of lies Chest out Back straight Clean cut Dishonest Hopeless Fake the soul A smile Your theft at life

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 04/06/11 08:17 PM
"..Like.."

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Wed 04/06/11 09:19 PM
Thanx for reading ^^ Glad you like it

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 04/06/11 09:42 PM
We CHEAT life in many ways,,yet we find it wasn't worth it in the end,,,wink,,,Nice write death,,,

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Thu 04/07/11 06:38 AM
Thanx ^^

LexFonteyne Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 32131	Thu 04/07/11 06:58 AM
Fantastic imagery. As always, I love your writing.

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Thu 04/07/11 07:23 AM
Thanx Lex ^^

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