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| Topic: Rate my latest poem & CHAT! | |
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you left me,
I was sad, but I'm moving on, I am glad, you broke my heart, but now it's repairing, but I still need someone, to complete the mending. WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK ? :-) |
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It is a nice piece. Time heals all wounds. Good luck.
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you left me, I was sad, but I'm moving on, I am glad, you broke my heart, but now it's repairing, but I still need someone, to complete the mending. WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK ? :-) As one who writes, you are expressing yourself, which is very good and I am sure humbling. Good luck and put youself first before anyone. The piece is very pretty though. |
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Evocative without descending into the maudlin. Hints of a much greater depth lying under the surface.
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