Topic: Absorbed
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Wed 02/16/11 12:05 AM
Her childhood taken, all she loved, forsaken.
Praying every night, for God to make things right.
Yet, no divine intervention,
her mind found its own redemption.
Molested by the man she called her dad.
Her young mind, just went mad.

She's an Angel on a chain,
still trapped within her pain.
She'll never be free, to rise above.
Never to know any man's Love.

Forced to keep it just between them two.
no one else ever knew.
Twisted and torn, becoming, deviantly reborn.
She over-came, by making life her game.
Living to love Jesus Christ.
Yet feeling wickedly enticed.


She's an Angel on a chain,
still trapped within her pain.
She'll never be free to rise above.
Never to know any man's love

Her soul buried away, hidden since that day.
Memories she'll take to her grave
Her heart and soul, she cannot save.
A casualty of life.
Imprisoned to live this strife.


She's just an Angel on a chain,
Still trapped within her dad's pain.:cry: :heart:






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Wed 02/16/11 09:59 AM
Do any of you feel THIS could be a song????whoa :heart:

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Wed 02/16/11 12:17 PM
you have your own great unique style
an honesty in your words

peace

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Wed 02/16/11 12:30 PM
very nice T- you should make it whatever you wish.:thumbsup:

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Wed 02/16/11 05:33 PM
Thanks Jim,,and thanks so much for you giving me,,what my words speak to you,,as you read them,,,Thats great feed-back man!!
drinker

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Wed 02/16/11 05:37 PM

very nice T- you should make it whatever you wish.:thumbsup:

flowerforyou Thanks Pam,,,It has many things in it as for feelings,,and insanity caused in both..
But a heavy rock flow,,,would be cool to hear...
Thank you for reading and theses words,,,
OH,,,and I gotta ,,I
ll repost another reply here,,to show you something that was so cool..

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Wed 02/16/11 05:44 PM
THIS came to me through email here,,and only the subject is shown not the sender,,,
BUT THIS,,,make all my written words and poems,,WORTH WHILE!

This was from a person who lives HALF WAY AROUND THE GLOBE,,,and
wrote me to express,,,how THEY felt through reading this poem of mine above,,,I felt so moved by their words,,,here,,you folks read,


Your latest poem moved me. It's an explicit depiction of a traumatic experience any girl could have. Makes me more wary of my young daughter's safety.

I hope you have a nice day, Terry. You may not realize it but thank you for touching other people's lives the way you do.




This touched my heart,,when thinking they live on another continent
and read my little poem here.....So Cool that I can open a heart
with just words....

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Sat 02/19/11 11:44 AM
:heart: flowerforyou A childs LIFE and their HEART,,,should NEVER be torn apart,,,,SO every person can grow to believe and know they have
NOTHING to forget, and NOTHING to experience,,except a Real Loving START.
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