Ok I just updated my profile and would like some opinion on what needs to be changed or added to improve it .. my luck has been rather poor in my search so any help will be appreciated

If it were me I'd remove the parts about "not having much luck" Makes potential onlookers wonder what's wrong with you & makes you sound almost desperate or vulnerable leaving the gate wide open for those who wants to take advantage of you & closes the door for those who may wonder about your luck & afraid to contact you. Welcome to Mingle & good luck!!

love the pic of you smiling. makes a person feel welcomed and eager to get to know you. then i read your profile and the feeling goes away. everyone here has had poor luck finding someone special, that's why we are here. then as i read on the feeling got a spark, but it was quickly extinguished. i think you should rewrite it and try to stay positive about you and what interests you. your smile is inviting and hopefully your write will back the invitation up enough to get you some cool cats (and maybe even a nice dog) to message you. you can do this girl