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Your kisses taste so sweet,
Laying beside you on this silkened sheet. My finger tips,parting back your hair. Gazing into your eyes so thankful, this time we share. Thinking about the all you do to me, wondering, your dreams. Your fantasies. Baby, I want to please you, fill you with me. Hearing every Tiny gasp, that soft whispered slur, As your eyes feel with fire, and your thoughts all a blur. Taking you once again to that place you long to be. Where our souls can touch our passions run, strong and free. Me inside you, as you go, watching your face, in its beautiful, loving glow. |
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Very nice iam
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Very nice iam |
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The best I have ever read, the visual is nice
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The best I have ever read, the visual is nice lol,,I've not tried to write passions from my inner core,,for a long time,,,and its funny really,,,w/o true moments lived. One would never have the details so vividly itched into them. Thank you my friend,,,you always reply,,, |
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Your welcome
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Amazing!
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WOW!
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not too bad
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Amazing! |
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WOW! to feel you read me as I tried to have you feel it,,,very COOL. |
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wow!
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not too bad Hey man,,,I am NO-POET,,,I am just a guy who is TRYING to get better at making others FEEL ME through my words here,, And if only one has that happen,,,I am a happy man.. I read your profile and see your a poet,,, Please feel free to post and all members are welcomed to do that even w/o being poets,,,lol,,I had to say that in case some were reading this...good luck on here man,,And THANKS for serving..this Country... |
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Sooo kewl.
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Thank you much Stefy,,,
And Indigo YOUR VERY KEWL to lady,,,thank you very much.. Thanks for all your replies,,, |
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