Topic: Love Sweet
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Wed 07/04/07 09:28 PM


Such a look in your eyes, bright lit with desire,
The singe of soft velvet as you burn me with fire, your
Touch as it sooths and caresses my skin, the electrified
Nerves that you spark, flames flicker within, oh
how you lift me to levels, heights that were once so unknown,
and you take me to places, where I’ve never flown,
I writhe with such pleasure as your fingers go walking,
across fields of passion, your seductive slow talking, such
Sweet sultry words that you whisper to me,
you guide me with fingers, you help me to see,
the complete joy in giving my soul and my heart,
You bring me up with you, help me make a new start, your
touch so exquisite, my body jumps as though stung,
I’m an instrument you play, fine tuned and well strung,
You pluck at each chord, such a sweet melody, I open my eyes,
To star gaze and see, your hot passion, deep longing and
an infinite love, and a bonding of souls, one
I’ve only dreamed of, and I cry out in pleasure, and
whisper your name, as you spark my inferno and
fan my hot flame, white hot passion, sparks flying,
a crescendo of color, I close my eyes,
and I know there’s no other, to bring me such pleasure,
such sweet ecstasy,and no one who’ll bring tears,
like those you bring me,
When you say…….
I love you~
©awh june 2007


NANCYM1957's photo
Wed 07/04/07 09:37 PM

I thought your poem was good,and true meaning

MenelikG's photo
Wed 07/04/07 09:40 PM
BRAVA!, BRAVA! . . . Love it MsWiz!

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Wed 07/04/07 09:44 PM
Thank you Nancy~

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Wed 07/04/07 09:44 PM
Thank you so much Menelik~flowerforyou

DTHRomeo's photo
Wed 07/04/07 09:44 PM
nice :smile:

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Wed 07/04/07 10:17 PM
Thank you Romeo~

LAMom's photo
Wed 07/04/07 10:42 PM
WOW!!!!!! Amazing once again,,, Bravo flowerforyou

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Wed 07/04/07 10:45 PM
You're very kind Mom...thank you!flowerforyou :heart: