Topic: On oblivious shore
bedlum1's photo
Sat 01/08/11 02:39 PM
Edited by bedlum1 on Sat 01/08/11 02:41 PM
On oblivions shore...

I walk upon oblivions shore,
In search for a shadow of me,
For the man that I was once before,
With his spirit unshackled and free.
But darkness surrounds me everywhere,
In this void, this black abyss,
I stumble forward feeling the air,
And I hear the demons hiss.
He's just out if reach & taunting me,
With visions of self doubt,
I'm stuck inside this terrible dream,
And it seems there's no way out.
So I wade out in the waters
And surrender myself to the sea
Sunrise breaks ,night becomes day,
Letting go just set me free


Sneaksintoyourheart's photo
Sat 01/08/11 02:56 PM
(((JEFF)))

still enjoy your poems my friend smooched smooched

Tessa02's photo
Sat 01/08/11 03:04 PM
That was great!! Really loved it!! flowerforyou

bedlum1's photo
Sat 01/08/11 03:17 PM
Thank youblushing flowerforyou

earthytaurus76's photo
Sat 01/08/11 04:29 PM
Now if only the people on the JERSEY SHORE were so poetic...

bedlum1's photo
Sat 01/08/11 06:06 PM

Now if only the people on the JERSEY SHORE were so poetic...
flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 01/08/11 07:46 PM
Nice words man and a nice place for it to take our minds,,,

bedlum1's photo
Sun 01/09/11 05:56 AM

Nice words man and a nice place for it to take our minds,,,
Thank youdrinker

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/10/11 12:55 PM
There is greatness in the silence

Namaste'flowerforyou

bedlum1's photo
Mon 01/10/11 07:06 PM

There is greatness in the silence

Namaste'flowerforyou
blushing thank youflowerforyou