Topic: wate for me
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Thu 01/06/11 07:32 PM
wait for me at the pearley gates,we,ll go walking hand in hand.find our selves a beach somewhere write love letters in the sand,so wait for me at the pearley gates we,ll go places we neva been we,ll watch the tide as it comes in.and listen to mermaids as they sing ,

littlepretty200's photo
Thu 01/06/11 07:45 PM
that walk to the pearly gates and the beach sounds nice ................................................................

wux's photo
Sat 01/08/11 08:40 AM
Edited by wux on Sat 01/08/11 08:42 AM

wait for me at the pearly gates,
we shall walk in there hand in hand.
we'll find for ourselves a beach somewhere
and write love letters in the sand.

so wait for me at the pearly gates
we'll walk around places we've never been
we'll watch the high tide as it comes in
and listen to mermaids as they sing ,


This is what I call a beautiful poem.

Post-modernist sentimentalist, neo-romantic and childlike.

Beautiful.