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Just some thoughts I have that I believe could apply to anyone. Talk about yourself more. Do so without bragging and try to put it in terms that would let ladies know what that would do for them. Check your grammar. I realize that British English has spelling differences, but there are only a couple of grammar exceptions. Spelling and grammar tell women that you put thought into what you say.

Having a picture of you that shows you on a cover of MAXIM is not tasteful. Don't look for a soul mate or that special someone, since it can sound cheesy or fake. You are looking for a woman or lady with some common interests that you can date and get to know better and allow the relationship to grow. Use your own words, but be clear and sincere.

Feel free to comment or criticize my profile, so long as you are polite or kind. Peace and luck to all.

lol, thanks a lot for correcting me ( can't help with my grammar it's an old habit), also the picture you mentioned I never had any intentions of teasing anybody it's just I like being creative, anyway Thank you very much for your advice ;]]