If I could sit on a star
and look down from afar
where would I find you?

If I look deep in my heart
felt around in the dark
Where would I find you?

Are you sitting near me now?
Have you already gone into the clouds?

Between you and me
Is there a big sea
Where are you hiding?

If I looked over the ocean
And into the sunset
Would you be sailing?

I look for you so hard
Searching everywhere.

If you can hear me right now
Singing my song
Please don't ignore me

I have a feeling this is where you belong.

That's actually very pretty. It flows well and has very nice imagery. With a few touch ups here and there, I think it is publishable. :)

thanks, its actually a song I wrote. It has a nice melody when sung.

so let it rip!

i was gonna say it had a lyrical rhythm, very nice!!