Topic: Downwards Spiral
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Tue 11/02/10 03:06 PM
Hey everyone, I play the guitar and write a few songs, this is one that I have written recently, sounds better with music lol:

Verse 1:
Alone again I find myself
The darkness over my head
Souless eyes they stare right through
Chilling me right to the bone [Chorus]

Verse 2:
And there you are with your hateful lies
That splatter my blood on the ground
Im trapped, trapped in your eyes, that burry me alive [Bridge]

Verse 3:
So here I am, all alone
Completely hollow inside
Tried to fly, lost the will
I guess I shouldn't have tried....[End song]

Chorus:
Fly far from here, Fly fast and never return
Death that haunts me, ghosts surround me
While I'm spiralling downwards

Bridge:
Down, down again
Down to the depths my soul doth pay
Words that burn me, eyes that hurt me
Spiraling down, down again [Chorus]


So yea comments more than welcome :)


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Tue 11/02/10 03:49 PM
great job! wish i could hear you play chica...Rock on