Topic: Bullet in the Mirror
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Mon 10/18/10 12:10 PM
I don't mean to disappoint, but that's all I know,
I'm not worth very much, I give all I can though,
Dimes match the pennies, even that debt is due,
Papier-mâché to match the grade, replaced the queue,
Lines for the space, about face, too few.

Like a bullet in the mirror, crashing through tears,
Shattered remnants that were pure, even though so obscure.

Should have planned this through, taken a few notes,
Paper and ink can't fill this hole, this isn't for show,
I'm not trying to gain pull, this isn't part of a goal,
Just a reminder of what you fill, the gap that is whole,
Papier-mâché to match the grade, replaced the queue,
Lines for the space, about face, too few.

Like a bullet in the mirror, crashing through tears,
Shattered remnants that were pure, even though so obscure.

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Mon 10/18/10 01:30 PM
I like this one Fear....thanks for the readflowerforyou

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Tue 10/19/10 06:41 AM
like it Fear.smooched *hugs*

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Wed 10/20/10 09:24 AM
Thank you Kim and 2Kids. Your comments are much appreciated, as always.flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sat 10/23/10 09:04 AM
Much enjoyed :smile:

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Sat 10/23/10 09:27 PM
What a good poem.

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Sat 10/23/10 09:44 PM
:thumbsup:

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Sun 10/24/10 06:59 AM
:smile: drinker

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Mon 10/25/10 08:20 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone, always appreciated.flowerforyou flowerforyou