Topic: without
ozman1887's photo
Sat 10/09/10 08:08 PM
Without you im like a leaf with out a tree its just a leaf or like a car with no gas I don't go anywhere with out it or a bird with no fethers I can't spread my wings and sore without u I would be lost and going no where fast and I would not be able to sore with the best of them without u I would be nothing.

Queene123's photo
Sat 10/09/10 08:12 PM

Without you im like a leaf with out a tree its just a leaf or like a car with no gas I don't go anywhere with out it or a bird with no fethers I can't spread my wings and sore without u I would be lost and going no where fast and I would not be able to sore with the best of them without u I would be nothing.


adding to your poem

my life seem to be empty
as i have no gas for its on empty
i cant go anywhere as my life
seem to feel meaningless
as the bird cant fly with no wings
as a leaf on a tree has no colors so no true
beauty can be shown from the tress
i guess maybe a drink or two can that solve
that problem in some degree

no photo
Sat 10/09/10 08:54 PM
Edited by NARESH1112 on Sat 10/09/10 08:55 PM
Just the corollary of "The Station" by Robert J Hastings.