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Trapped behind these windows and doors
The pain closes in Diminishing my natural ability to breathe I'm choking and gasping for air Fighting back the army of memories That make longing for you my insanity Far beyond these rocks and trees I picture you waiting for me If my heart had wings I would fly to you Peace never last as long as when you're with me I would give up anything for just a moment An escape from this pristine wasteland To ease the silent thundering in my chest Step into my empty desolate world Before the desperation that torments me Bleeds through my eyes This life just isn't enough It probably never will be Don't leave me here broken For broken is what I will ever be Without you. |
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A very passionate write.
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The first few lines are a little, I don't know, distant? With the line: Peace never last as long as when you're with me, I feel you start to get into your stride, and from here it gets stronger and stronger. Is it possible that you sat down to write this and it took a few lines to find your Muse? Some great visuals in the latter part (Bleeds through my eyes). Keep 'em comin'
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