Topic: could you critique my profile please? | |
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i want to see why not very many people are interested in me.
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ummmm......
cause ya keep asking for validation just hop in the forums with us and have fun and talk away and voice your opinion let everyone get to know you other than your pro there are so many interesting subjects here jump in girl......!!!!!!!! |
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You gotta be your own biggest fan before anyone else will be.
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ummmm...... cause ya keep asking for validation just hop in the forums with us and have fun and talk away and voice your opinion let everyone get to know you other than your pro there are so many interesting subjects here jump in girl......!!!!!!!! I'm not really that well-liked on most forums....I tend to be very immature. |
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well if you have these type of issues...
maybe a dating/social site really is not for you.... but then again there probably is someone looking for that...i don't know like i said....the forums are where you should go to let everyone judge for themselves |
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ummmm...... cause ya keep asking for validation just hop in the forums with us and have fun and talk away and voice your opinion let everyone get to know you other than your pro there are so many interesting subjects here jump in girl......!!!!!!!! I'm not really that well-liked on most forums....I tend to be very immature. I would have emailed you this, but your age limits prohibit me from communicating with you. Because of your strong faith I think a Christian site might be a better choice. I say that kindly .. I am a God follower myself but I am not young and inexperienced so this kind of site doesn't bother me. Secondly telling any guy he will be #2 always next to your grandma? They are two totally different relationships .. why make the guy feel 2nd before you even meet him and give him a chance in your life? Guys don't want to feel "less than" before they've even started. I really don't see you succeeding with either your profile the way it is written, nor your immaturity on the forums. Get somewhere safe sweetie .. and grow into womanhood there |
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thanks, I'll erase the grandma part.
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look like your 15 in that pic jmo anyway
welcome and good luck |
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look like your 15 in that pic jmo anyway welcome and good luck that's the look i was aiming for :D thank you! |
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First of all, the positives. You know what you want. You don't want someone over 24. Ok. However, when you say that in your profile it does come off more snobbish. Maybe say something like "Guys. Please respect that I don't want anyone over the age of 24. It is a preference of mine". Trust me. Guys will be turned off from reading it the way you wrote it.
I also don't get why since you are 21, you want to look like a teenager. But, that is you, and so if that is what you desire, then go for it. And, as Fade mentioned, the Grandma part is like a big "Red Flag". Hey, love the fact that your Grandma is that important to you. But you cannot expect that every man is gonna want to come to you. One more thing. You come off as more of a young woman who is a bit jaded. I might be wrong, but the way some of your profile is written I do get this feeling. I know that if I was in your age preference, that reading your profile would turn me off. And, one thing about a profile is that you want to write something that sends out a good vibe. For the guys who do take time to read profiles, and to see who you are, being more positive than negative is a good thing. Good luck to you. |
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I'm going to use your suggestion :)
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Cool. And, just so you know, their is absolutely nothing wrong with your preferences. I just felt that your profile needed to say it with more...tact? (You know. Trying to say it nicer). I mean, I refuse to date chicks who have smelly feet, but that's just me.
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Your fine. You should start posting more and within time you will find someone. Just remember to never ever quit.
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