Topic: Floating On A Cloud With You | |
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I tell you I am floating around
You say you are floating too I ask you dreamily if you want to share a cloud You ask me Is it fluffy? Of course it is fluffy, all of my clouds are fluffy Even my darkest ones Can I shape it into a castle? You may shape it into anything your heart desires A castle, a horse, anything at all Does it taste like Ice Cream?? It tastes of all the flavors of ice cream imaginable Chocolate,vanilla, peppermint, pistachio The list goes on and on for all time You tell me you will sit on the edge and watch The people scurry about below I tell you I am laying down hanging my head over the edge Watching the people and the way they move around Can we fly to another cloud for a better view?? Of course we can, we can go as far as our imaginations desire We can roam to whatever realm we desire You ask if you dangle your feet over the edge Will the air feel like water in a pond?? Just close your eyes and feel the little fish nibble at your toes Feel the gentle caress of the water lilies on your ankles I tell you that you are the first The first adult to come with me on this cloud venture That I am told I am a dreamer and to stop To grow up, stop being such a child I shyly reach for your hand Whispering that I could think of no other I'd rather be on this cloud with... ***Dedicated to AdventureBegins, thank you for floating upon my cloud with me, for shining that light of inspiration upon me once again.*** |
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you sure can write with so much emotion.. That is so cool
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AHHHHHH
GREAT poem and great people,,,, |
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Great writing
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what a peaceful place you describe.. you make it so i can see it happening..
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