Topic: Currently Untitled (Open to suggestions)
WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:04 PM

Do not stand at my grave and mourn.
I did not die. I have been re-born.
You can find me at night as a brillant star;
But don't look too hard for I am never far.
You can find me in water, air, and fire.
I am everywhere. I will never tire.
Do not stand at my grave and weep;
For I am all around in beauty so deep.


(Written & dedicated to my grandparents who are now together .. at last)

ujGearhead's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:06 PM
Not gone, relocated.

WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:09 PM
I'm thinking I kinda like that. Thank you.

ujGearhead's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:10 PM
:smile:

kc0003's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:12 PM

Not gone, relocated.



:thumbsup:

no photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:17 PM
:smile: flowerforyou
Title suggestion="Eternal Brilliance":wink:

WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:24 PM
Thanks guys. I actually have another poem that is similar. I'll use both of your suggestions. Thanks again :)

ujGearhead's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:31 PM
The musician creativity in me pop's out on occasion, so if you need ideas, you know where to come. ;)

WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/22/10 04:34 PM
I'll remember that.