Topic: Love Is Just What You Can't See
daisuke88's photo
Sun 09/19/10 02:27 AM
Edited by daisuke88 on Sun 09/19/10 02:27 AM
Every time I see you
you give me the look that I don’t recognise
you make me wonder,
you made me want you more.

I can feel you with my heart’s eyes
So vividly that I forget to blink

Love is just what you can’t see
In this dramatic time
I want to dream the same dream as you
The cold night wind flits across our cheeks
Heart trembling, I unconsciously started to sing
Our favourite song

If we take it not as a coincidence but as fate
Will our two futures be in the same place?

If a shadow of loneliness lurks in your heart
Believe in the tenderness
That will warm your heart before it freezes over

Love is just what you can’t see
Like turning to a new page
Of a romantic story
Love me, feel me,
All those annoying lies melted into the wind
And I took your soft hand forever,
And gave you my heart




Dodo_David's photo
Tue 09/21/10 07:50 AM
Daisuke,

I cannot get enough of your poems.
Please send copies of them to me.


brwnkimba's photo
Thu 09/23/10 06:15 PM
:thumbsup:

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Sun 09/26/10 09:42 PM
hey juzz loved ur poetry:)

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Sun 09/26/10 09:43 PM
:thumbsup: