Topic: Taking Me Apart
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Tue 06/26/07 07:31 PM
Take me apart
Piece by piece
Vein by vein
Pick apart my mind
Tell me what you find
Look me over with a microscope
Pull out my every last hope
Scrape away my very last desire
Feeding it to the fire
dissect every little dream
Then toss it into the toxic stream
What is left of me???
What remains??
Anything at all??
Put all the pieces you saved back together again
Weight me down now
Tether my feet to the ground
Tie me up
For I am just a shell
And the wind carries me away..

jenndis2002's photo
Tue 06/26/07 07:38 PM
Wow that is powerful cherub!!!

transientmind's photo
Tue 06/26/07 07:39 PM
Awesome, CCP.flowerforyou

It's like a bad@$$ song, IMHO.

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Tue 06/26/07 07:41 PM
...and you are looking for which part of the sympathy aspect?

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Wed 06/27/07 05:21 AM
Thanks Jennflowerforyou

Thanks TransientMind, yeah it does sound like a bad@$$
songflowerforyou

graylo..dunno what your issue is but not lookin for sympathy of any
sort, maybe you ought not be so judgmental

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Wed 06/27/07 05:38 AM
that was an awesome poem sis flowerforyou :heart: