Topic: Taking Me Apart | |
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Take me apart
Piece by piece Vein by vein Pick apart my mind Tell me what you find Look me over with a microscope Pull out my every last hope Scrape away my very last desire Feeding it to the fire dissect every little dream Then toss it into the toxic stream What is left of me??? What remains?? Anything at all?? Put all the pieces you saved back together again Weight me down now Tether my feet to the ground Tie me up For I am just a shell And the wind carries me away.. |
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Wow that is powerful cherub!!!
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Awesome, CCP.
It's like a bad@$$ song, IMHO. |
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...and you are looking for which part of the sympathy aspect?
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Thanks Jenn
Thanks TransientMind, yeah it does sound like a bad@$$ song graylo..dunno what your issue is but not lookin for sympathy of any sort, maybe you ought not be so judgmental |
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that was an awesome poem sis
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