Topic: no sun
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Mon 08/16/10 07:15 AM
terror now has a new face
tha world just became a dark place
its taking my sun and whats left to come
is unknown 2 my whole human race

shez there when i need her
and there when i dont
she smiles when i see her
even if i wont

then she puts her arms round me
tells me not 2 cry
i wonder how can this be
the doctors must lie

i hear the words "there is no cure"
and darkness closes in
her spirits stay up her heart so pure
shez sure that she can win

statistics are low
but morale is high
its a hard line 2 tow
but well have 2 get by

brave faces are on
theres no tears in sight
we dont know how long
but 2 the end we will fight

but in times of despair
to this it has come
im here begging you god
please dont take my mum

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Mon 08/16/10 07:26 AM
I absolutely love this poem. It gave me goose bumps. this is an amazing work of art. I really do love it.

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Mon 08/16/10 01:32 PM
I love it too Sundae flowerforyou

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Tue 08/17/10 07:36 PM
thankyou sooo much...i get nervous putting posts up here...not sure why but sometimes u gotta vent...thanx again flowerforyou

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Wed 08/18/10 01:31 AM
:cry: