What do you look for in someone new?
Your "Standards"

This will be my last post for a while

Bye ^^

A 'spark' DeathsTreaty, a certain 'spark'.........
PS I have enjoyed reading your poems, they are a bit dark and sad for me but I still enjoy the 'flow', looking forward to some more of your posts

Hello Liora ^^


Thanx for reading, glad you enjoy them ^^



Do you mind me asking, can you describe the "Flow" or my poetry?

I cant see it myself for some reason

I think you have good quality

Thanx ^^

Hi DeathsTreaty,

Here goes:

Today ~ (made me smile)
Do not forget who you are and who you want to be
Don't forget the little things that make you smile

Babble ~ (my personal fave)
No spark, No flame, No desire
Don't want to leave myself behind
Don't want to live in a daze
Want to be somewhere

Change of today
Taking me somewhere
No longer a dream I live

Flavor of Tears ~ (thought provoking)

When ~ (sad, reminded me of someone)
When the Mind shatters
.....
Is that is when?

For me, the poems 'ask' questions, as if thinking out loud, the 'flow' may not make sense just written down, there is reasoning and creative linking, the questions are answered in a way that is realateable (my word NOT in the dictionary )either through our own experiences or what we know someone else has been through.

That's the 'flow', the linking. (imo)

Oh, I see ^^


That makes a lot of sense

Thanx for clearing that up for me


Although I have to admit...my recent post seem to take the Questioning on more than usual
A more enforced style I guess ^^