Topic: in blue tunnel
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Sun 08/01/10 03:36 PM
Edited by jimz on Sun 08/01/10 03:53 PM
i underline the red line
i rewind the yellow curse
i whisper the real
i tunnel over the under

i am back from the dead
seas abound likeness
seas demand love
i cannot write the word love

i am back from the dead
we are the dew people
we remember the good times
with the bad

remember me when i was dead
remember the demands
remember the curse
was it forbidden to remember
the good times with the bad

sun run sun
in blue marble the yellow worm crawls
from behind worm fans golden curve divine
worm tunnels in blue flame

golden blue worm
blue down void
worm tunnels in blue tunnel
worm born in tunnel

lions vomit is simian orange
lions fangs are golden orange
torn worm is seeds and veins
sun breathes in torniquet worm
stripped

went the red tented worm
that bled the word why

birth leveling in funnel flame
without smoke

i remember being
born

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Mon 08/02/10 07:05 PM
jimz! Good to see you post again.

Absolutely awesome write!

kc0003's photo
Mon 08/02/10 07:26 PM
hey jim, long time....

enjoyed the write drinker

s1owhand's photo
Tue 08/03/10 03:10 AM
bigsmile

missed this

waving

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Tue 08/03/10 11:33 PM
Born is in your WRITE, and we have ALL missed your LIGHT..

Great reading ya Bro,,,,nice work....drinker

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Wed 08/04/10 08:21 AM
Hello Jimmy!!!

I always love your descriptions of colors....unlike no otherwaving

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Fri 08/06/10 12:35 PM
sweet,thanksdrinker

jimmy