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DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Tue 07/27/10 09:06 PM Edited by DeathsTreaty on Tue 07/27/10 09:12 PM
When the Mind Shatters The soul thrashed Heart at a loss We resemble the very thing we hate The beast we cast aside to starve The animal left to stare down on us When all else exist out of reach Is that is when?...

Italy0219 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 2523	Tue 07/27/10 09:07 PM
We meet God.

RowBaby Joined Fri 01/22/10 Posts: 11819	Wed 07/28/10 02:43 PM
I like this DT. Makes you think. Makes me wonder if we do resemble the very thing we hate.

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Wed 07/28/10 02:50 PM
We have met Lucifer! I hope I never see him!

RowBaby Joined Fri 01/22/10 Posts: 11819	Wed 07/28/10 02:59 PM
I didn't get Lucifer from Beast, but that works. I thought of the beast more like "addiction".

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Wed 07/28/10 03:03 PM
thought of the as lucifer. Lucifer is the beast also thought of addiction as lucifer like monkey on your back That's just the way I thought great write!

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Wed 07/28/10 03:35 PM
Thanx ^^ glad you enjoyed it

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