just wonder what people really thing about my profile. can i get some help people

Short and to the point.

What kind of woman are you looking for?

What kind of religious chaplain will you be?

Should the woman be of the same religion?

Welcome

Some things to consider:

Delete this statement and add information instead, "this is not a lot of info on me. if there is more you would like to know about me please ask."

The point of a profile is to summarize and highlight information about you so a person can decide if they want to contact you. If you don't write a more complete essay then you might not inspire interest. Why should they have to ask, right? How about if you read an incomplete profile of a female member? Turn-off or encouraging?

I like the picture in the 3rd position as a main picture more than the one you have now. The one now is at a weird angle and you have an odd look on your face. The 3rd pic seems more friendly and relaxed.

Join the forums to meet active members!

thank you for your help and i will be fixing it up soon.

Well first off .. I agree about being in love with God! You started out right for sure.

Pics are good. Information must have been changed since you are no longer telling women to ask you for details that we figure you should be providing free of charge (ie, offered up, not requested by us =)


And third .. NY rocks!!

and I KNOW it's not all "Christian like" but hey .. gotta say ..



No sleep 'til - Brooklyn

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XtztvaGN92A&feature=related

Foot on the pedal never ever false metal
Engine running hotter than a boiling kettle
My job's ain't a job it's a damn good time
City to city I'm running my rhymes
On location touring around the nation
Beastie Boys always on vacation
Itchy trigger finger but a stable turntable
I do what I do best because I'm illing and able
Ain't no faking your money I'm taking
Going coast to coast watching all the girlies shaking
While you're at the job working nine to five
The Beastie Boys at the Garden cold kickin' it live

No sleep 'til -

Another plane another train
Another bottle in the brain
Another girl another fight
Another drive all night
Our manager's crazy he always smokes dust
He's got his own room at the back of the bus
Tour around the world you rock around the clock
Plane to hotel girls on the jock
We're thrashing hotels like it's going out of style
Getting paid along the way cause it's worth your while
Four on the floor Adrock's out the door
M.C.A.'s in the back because he's skeezin' with a whore
We got a safe in the trunk with money in a stack
With dice in the front and Brooklyn's in the back

No sleep 'til -

[repeat chorus]

Ain't seen the light since we started this band
M.C.A. get on the mic my man
Born and bred Brooklyn U.S.A.
They all me Adam Yauch but I'm M.C.A.
Like a lemon to a lime a lime to a lemon
I sip the def ale with all the fly women
Got limos, arena, TV shows
Autograph pictures and classy hos
Step off homes get out of my way
Taxing little girlies form here to L.A.
Waking up before I get to sleep
Cause I'll be rocking this party eight days a week

[repeat chorus]

profile updated, now what do you think

Looks pretty good. You could try including a few personal stories to show your personality and expand beyond stating your traits.