Topic: under the stars | |
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It feels so good
To feel so small gazeing to the heavens out above us all out here in the open not a single light or sound out here all alone laying on the ground the stars are here to comfort me eraceing scars you cannot see I love to be alone out here at night something about it just feals so right picking out constellations like my canvas in the sky out here on my own hours pass on by greeted by my friends Orion, draco, and pegasus every time the clouds come by my stars I dearly miss here I can forget about, all the things that make my my life so scary it really is too bad, that it's only temorary |
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ah, I love sky gazing myself...
very nice |
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i really like this poem.. however i sure dont see it as "dark" at all great work! i find it quite serene.. humm maybe i am dark?
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This is very pretty poem
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i really like this poem.. however i sure dont see it as "dark" at all great work! i find it quite serene.. humm maybe i am dark? I haven't posted the dark stuff here. It would break terms of service. Not all my poetry is dark this is one of the lighter ones. I even wrote one about dog poo once. |
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well thank you star blazer Every once in a while pretty is my aim lol
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i find this one really good!! put me right there daydreaming about it.. very good!!
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