Topic: under the stars
grostad's photo
Sat 06/12/10 10:31 AM
It feels so good

To feel so small

gazeing to the heavens

out above us all

out here in the open

not a single light or sound

out here all alone

laying on the ground

the stars are here to comfort me

eraceing scars you cannot see

I love to be alone out here at night

something about it just feals so right

picking out constellations

like my canvas in the sky

out here on my own

hours pass on by

greeted by my friends Orion,

draco, and pegasus

every time the clouds come by

my stars I dearly miss

here I can forget about,

all the things that make my my life so scary

it really is too bad,

that it's only temorary

Ladylid2012's photo
Sat 06/12/10 10:50 AM
ah, I love sky gazing myself...

very nice flowerforyou

buttons's photo
Sat 06/12/10 02:58 PM
i really like this poem.. however i sure dont see it as "dark" at all great work! i find it quite serene.. humm maybe i am dark?

starblazer's photo
Sat 06/12/10 03:05 PM
This is very pretty poemflowerforyou

grostad's photo
Sat 06/12/10 08:00 PM

i really like this poem.. however i sure dont see it as "dark" at all great work! i find it quite serene.. humm maybe i am dark?

I haven't posted the dark stuff here. It would break terms of service. Not all my poetry is dark this is one of the lighter ones. I even wrote one about dog poo once.

grostad's photo
Sat 06/12/10 08:02 PM
well thank you star blazer happy Every once in a while pretty is my aim lol

buttons's photo
Sat 06/12/10 09:19 PM
i find this one really good!! put me right there daydreaming about it.. very good!!