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Topic: ~ if I could see my insides
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 06/10/10 08:00 AM
sweet thorns in my mind I swim in a pool of bullets metallic cookie dust kiss me taste me thunder in your mouth this different kind of lust

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 06/10/10 08:45 PM
different? this has a soft feel that i found refreshing...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 06/11/10 05:30 AM
kc..thankyou for noticing this.. teasingbrunette

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 06/11/10 05:35 AM
i am a good notice--er

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Fri 06/11/10 09:47 AM
This is extremely cool. And kinda hot. Dig it tremendously.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 06/11/10 10:51 AM


RowBaby Joined Fri 01/22/10 Posts: 11819	Fri 06/11/10 04:25 PM
I love the last line.

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sat 06/12/10 08:28 PM
like a heart punch. short, fast... powerful

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 06/13/10 06:36 AM
Rowbaby.....thankyou for reading.. grostad...like the comment.

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