Topic: Haha, rate my profile and pictures! =D | |
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lol, this should be FUN and interesting...hehe! ; )
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lol, this should be FUN and interesting...hehe! ; ) You're right... Fun and Interesting! All for the wrong reasons.... good luck |
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Edited by
MelodyGirl
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Mon 06/07/10 12:11 PM
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Welcome
The first thing I would adjust is your habit of using “haha” and “LOL”. There are so many other ways to express humor – and in a more intelligent manner. Those acronyms are over-used and annoying. Use your writing skills to exemplify your tone. You seek an intellectual woman; attract her by embodying a clever wit yourself. When I see people constantly use “LOL” or “haha” – I imagine a ridiculous bobble head bouncing around and incessantly chirping, “haha, hahha”, like Woody Woodpecker. Your headline for this topic is an example. What is so funny about asking people for feedback on your profile? Aside from that, your profile is ok. I like the story and narrative you offered. Do you have better pix that aren’t blurry and show your face up close? Try to find a few that are clearer and bring you to the forefront. Join the forums to meet active members! |
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Anything with the word "sexy" in it rocks!
Welcome to Mingle. |
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Thanks guys! ;-)
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Edited by
heavenlyboy34
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Mon 06/07/10 06:18 PM
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edit: n/m, wrong thread
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edit: n/m, wrong thread Now THAT's ha ha .. LOL |
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