preety much says it all lol

Straight to the point...I like that

Hi

You actually have more of a profile than most! It’s not bad at all!

Consider changing your main pic. The one you have with a smile is better!

The only other thing I suggest is taking out this statement, "sadly all my friends have somebody and im the only one who doesnt... and i think i deserve a ltr more then any of them i have so much free time on my hands i really have nothing to focus on and it just really bites... "

That makes you seem needy/emo which is not a turn on. TURN OFF!

As a rule of thumb, no one needs anyone. We should learn to be a happy alone and alone doesn't mean "lonely".

Admitting that you are not focused and that you have too much free time will scream "needy" and sends the message that you might put all of your time into a girl and smother her.

Oh, run that essay through spelling/grammar check.

Join the forums and have fun!