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Topic: ~ my dust mingles with yours
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 06/03/10 10:47 AM
being thirsty I swallow a thousand colors and I breathe lowering my eyelashes I escape baring my breasts I am free my dust mingles with yours and I'm happy

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 06/03/10 10:52 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 06/05/10 07:29 AM
2KidsMom... thankyou goodmorning,goodweekend teasingbrunette

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Sat 06/05/10 07:42 AM
"I swallow a thousand colors" Favorite line. Good write, teasing. I like to see your poems happy.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 06/05/10 07:59 PM
plastic_pancakes... thankyou... ..would love to linger in happy.... teasingbrunette

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 06/06/10 09:59 PM
very nicely done... you packed a lot into such a small space! i breathe... i escape... i'm free... (free enough to surrender)...wonderful write!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 06/07/10 05:33 AM
kc0003... thankyou for readin' and the leavings smile teasingbrunette

elsolo Joined Fri 05/28/10 Posts: 51	Mon 06/07/10 08:15 PM
Whaoooooo Soulful

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 06/08/10 06:45 AM
great comment,elsolo... thankyou teasingbrunette

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