| Topic: ~ my dust mingles with yours | |
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| being thirsty I swallow a thousand colors and I breathe lowering my eyelashes I escape baring my breasts I am free my dust mingles with yours and I'm happy | |
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      2KidsMom...
 thankyou goodmorning,goodweekend teasingbrunette | |
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      "I swallow
 a thousand colors" Favorite line. Good write, teasing. I like to see your poems happy. | |
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      plastic_pancakes...
 thankyou... ..would love to linger in happy.... teasingbrunette | |
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      very nicely done...
 you packed a lot into such a small space! i breathe... i escape... i'm free... (free enough to surrender)...wonderful write!     | |
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      kc0003...
 thankyou for readin' and the leavings smile teasingbrunette | |
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      Whaoooooo Soulful 
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      great comment,elsolo...
 thankyou teasingbrunette | |
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