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Topic: Spirit
transientmind Joined Sat 03/10/07 Posts: 4827	Wed 06/20/07 03:45 AM
June-18-07 --:::Spirit:::-- Peace Is overrated Love Clearly outdated Charity Who gives a ****? Tolerance Get rid of it. Honor Don’t give me rules Faith Is just for fools Maybe… But it’s how I live Hate me I was taught to forgive You do your best to insult, offend Impose your conventions and condescend But it’s my observation That your denigration Comes from unrest So the more you detest The more you get in my face The more you prove my case So I hope someday you find release But until then, I wish you peace.

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bl8ant Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 2965	Wed 06/20/07 04:54 AM
that's one way of looking at it!!

Oceans5555 Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 1171	Wed 06/20/07 05:17 AM
Ouch...can such magnanimity be really possible? Well proposed, Jonathon! Oceans

transientmind Joined Sat 03/10/07 Posts: 4827	Wed 06/20/07 06:55 PM
I see several ways of looking at it but I do want more perspective, that's why I'm here. Here's to everyone's (individual) path. Peace

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 06/20/07 07:07 PM
TM, I like it.

SoulsTears Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 78	Wed 06/20/07 07:14 PM
thought provoking....

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 06/20/07 07:37 PM
Awesome

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