Twitch, click, a quick fix,
Grey, brain, chains stained,
Scarlet, sharpen, foreseen limitation,

To shield, to feel, too real,
Mind dines on the hearts rhyme,

I don't know, could close, it shows,
I wish I didn't feel like this, so stiff,

Vacant, space in, shame created,
Door close, comatose, some hope,
Walled in bricks, sick, this pit,
Hate just doesn't feel the same,

I don't know, could close, it shows,
I wish I didn't feel like this, so stiff,

I wish, for more than this, quivered lips,
My heart, still apart, just a shard,
Clear coat, blue stones, in it alone,
Black and white, with a shade of grey,
Hint of indigo, blissful yellow,
My handful of stones to throw,

To shield, to feel, too real,
Mind dines on the hearts rhyme,

I don't know, could close, it shows,
I wish I didn't feel like this, so stiff,

I've seen myself bleed, coup de grâce,
Upon a stage, dressed for shade, abate,
Stake, slave to rage, I can't make,
Limits and pivots of a symbolic sentence,
Caged, in this race, this is what I create,
Hypnotized, mesmerized, what I see through my eyes,

To shield, to feel, too real,
Mind dines on the hearts rhyme,

I don't know, could close, it shows,
I wish I didn't feel like this, so stiff,

I write, to remind, myself of this time,
That I went blind, couldn't sign, these lines,
Or when I went mute, couldn't whistle a tune,
I jot these letters, to reminisce when time was better,
This ink doesn't fade, it doesn't shake, or break,
The pen doesn't run dry, or write white-lies,
My paper doesn't tear, or run clear, it stays here,

Most of all, I write because I can't speak properly...

if i could paint the sky with blood i would

Thanks?

very nice ((Fear))

Very nice Fear. I wish I could listen to the music while I read it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LXIWRan3XGY

That's the music I used as a backdrop. Thanks for the comments.

Wow, Fear, the frustration feeling in in this poem seems powerful.

That is an intense song. I feel the frustration too.
Thanks Fear

Felt it as I read it, good write

Awesome write, friend!

There's an almost tangible tension in the lines here. Bravo.

Thanks everyone, really means a lot. Glad you could feel what I felt when I wrote this, relation is so much easier when it doesn't need to be explained.

Nice dude that rocks

still not love, but you are growing on me...

Underneath it all I still sense a sensitivity to life, love, hurt and longing... nice job

Thank you, much appreciated, really.

I'll get you one day, kc, one day.

Wow, is the word. The intensity.....Wow.

Thanks, Phuque2, much appreciated mate.